Sloan,

There should be a new category for your writing. Like Erotic Prose Poetry. I love how you start with the end. The build up better than viewing an elite strip tease artist. We know the ending at the beginning but the ride until all your clothes are off is even better than viewing your amazing nakedness.

The pleasure in your prose as we make love but then the pain you deliver straight no chaser. Thank you.

Bravo!